Thursday, 20 October 2011

Year 5 Able Writers

Pupils from year 5 attended an able writers enrichment group in Tenterden on 19th October. They had a great time and produced some lovely work. Please read their contributions below.

Feel free to praise and comment.

5 comments:

SAMUEL BRIDGER said...

THE SPOOKY WOOD

The hoot of an owl
The buzz of a bee
The squawk of a hawk
The cheep of baby yellow chicks
The knocking of a woodpecker
The spooky sounds of a ghost
The moo of a cow
The scattering of spiders
The cuckoo of a cuckoo
The graceful,shining moonlight rising upon the gloomy,coal-black trees.

THE END

SAMUEL BRIDGER said...

CROCODILE DOZE

Sleeping,
floating,
legs out flat.

Peeping,
gloating,
who's he looking at?

Light,dark,day and night
please don't let me start a fight
but not at night.

THE END

SAMUEL BRIDGER said...

A LEAF'S ADVENTURE

This is a wild leaf which floated one day,
miles and miles and miles away,
he went to India to have a dance
and did graceful back-flips over to France.
But this time he didn't have a dance.
He twirled and fluttered to the Rain Forest and crunched into a bear called Boris.

THE END

SAMUEL BRIDGER said...

FOREST OF FUDGE..

A mire of maltesers
A bush of bananas
A track of tarantulas
A den of disaster
A pond of pumpkins
A swamp of sandwiches
A glade of gummy bears
A tree of treats
and a Shrub of shells

THE END

Alexander McMillan said...

Fantastic writing Sam.. ring your friends in year 5 that went were there at the able writers day and tell them to add something too...

A mire of maltesers and a den of disaster... sounds like my daughter's bedroom...